I am a Year 7 student at Glenbrae School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 7 and my teachers are Mrs Tofa and Mrs Raj.
Josef
Josef, as quiet as an ant
Helped his family bravely like a man
All he hears is boom, Bang
As he cries he wants to die
So his sister can live A better life.
Malo e lelei HaydenEnjoyed reading your poem. Keep up the good work.
Miss Atuahiva
Wow, hahaa what a little short interesting poem, hahaaa, don't stop there Hayden keep going....
Hi Hayden, Wow this poem is very interesting, funny and kinda sad. keep it up hayden
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Malo e lelei Hayden
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed reading your poem. Keep up the good work.
Miss Atuahiva
ReplyDeleteWow, hahaa what a little short interesting poem, hahaaa, don't stop there Hayden keep going....
ReplyDeleteHi Hayden, Wow this poem is very interesting, funny and kinda sad.
ReplyDeletekeep it up hayden