I am a Year 7 student at Glenbrae School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 7 and my teachers are Mrs Tofa and Mrs Raj.
Monday, 3 December 2018
Lily and the Snowman
In the beginning, the snowman was nothing but then a little girl made it come to life. It was so magical when she made it...it came to live it had super powers it can make shadows not just any shadows it was like a if you wanted to watch a movie without paying all you had to do was Go to the magical snowman. the magical snowman had to find a place to live he started to melt and a little girl called Lily she went to find a play for the snowman to live in. she found our fridge in the garage the little girl told the snowman to get in the fridge before the door closed she gave her teddy bear to the Magical snowman. the next morning she went to play with the snowman older and older she got she did not care about about the magical snowman. when she got a job it was so frustrating until she remembered the snowman in the fridge she fount about the snowman if the snowman was still in the fridge she was so worried what about the snowman she went back to her old house and remembered to old magical snowman she had a daughter that's love that snowman.
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Hi Hayden,
ReplyDeleteIt's Leslie here, writing to you from Canada. I'm part of the Summer Learning Journey team and I see that you haven't posted any blogs just yet. Your story about Lily and the Snowman is very creative. I think you might really enjoy some of the activities on the Summer Learning Journey because some of them involved creating a little story about a picture. And there are many many other activities that are creative too. There are 3 full weeks left in the program so you have lots of time to complete any activities you wish to, and there are lots of other students in your school who are doing so as well. I hope you'll consider blogging with us!! The website is www.summerlearningjourney.co.nz. I'll look forward to responding to your blogs!!
Leslie